Wow as a person who doesn't like drawing stick figures out, you've really created something with this drawing of yours and it made me very impressed!! The shading on the stick figures makes them look realistic not to mention the slight opening the stick figure on the right is trying to make with the paper is just brilliant espcially with the folds denting or bending the lined paper out almost with it folding up makes me imagine as if the stick figures think it's a "curtain" and they want to "come out of the curtain" into the world of art. And the facial expression fits this situation very well since stick figures are known to be too simple to do when it comes to drawing, overall this is an incredible drawing I've never seen something like this before, bravo!!!
It's great! I love the details in the folds. My only criticism is that where your fingers are, the shadow should be smaller as you're likely to be pushing down at that point - so to make it more realistic, you should reduce the shadow to make it thinner there
Ha, just great! But please, try to make use of better lighting for the photo (outside daylight usually works great). It's sad to see that your good Idea's lose appeal just because the snapshots. I did a quick tonal recalibration of your image, just to illustrate how powerful this image could turn out. [link] I hope you don't mind.
Try some light, and keep the good Ideas coming! Twinelens